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Author's Craft

Topic Development:

• My writing is fully developed and I’ve explained or described the topic.
• My writing is full of interesting tidbits.
• When you start reading, you won’t want to stop.
• You can picture what I’m talking about.
• I show things happening.
• Are any parts confusing?
  
  

Organization:

• My writing has a clear beginning with a lead sentence that grabs the readers attention.
• Nothing seems out of order.
• My writing ends at just the right spot, and ties everything together.

Details:

• Do you have a favorite phrase or two in here ? I do.
• My words and phrases describe or convey my feelings.
• My words and phrases create images in the readers mind.

Voice:

• I have put my personal, recognizable stamp on this paper.
• You can hear my voice booming through. It’s me.
• I care about this topic, and it shows!
• I wrote to please myself, too.
• My writing rings with confidence.

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